Final draft
~ The New Student ~
Once upon a time in a little kingdom, everything was normal and peace. Then one day, there was a family moved in the kingdom. That family had an 8 years old daughter name Ellie. The family were kind to everyone and that why after while, people went and made friends with that family and they were became good neighbor.
And of course, Ellie had went to school. First day of school maybe a little strange with her and it kind made her feel shy. But Ms.A, Ellie’s teacher, cheered her up and just after few days, kids came and made friends with her just like her family did. Ellie was friendly and nice also funny, so that lots of kids like her, and also she was really popular in her school. But not Lina, the rich girl that hated Ellie who had been popular before Ellie come. So Lina tried to find Ellie’s weakness to make her become loser. So Lina made a plan:
· 1st: Made friend with Ely
· 2nd: Pretend to be Ellie’s best friend
· 3rd: Ask what Ellie’s weakness
· 4th: ~ And perfidy Ellie ~
So next day, Lina started talking with Ellie and they were quickly became friends and they were became best friends just in one day, Lina was surprise because she didn’t thought how easy it was . Ellie was really happy and talking normal with Lina, she didn’t know about Lina’s evil plan! Next day, Lina acted like normal and asked Ellie about what her weakness is…and Ellie answered it happily without thinking. And Lina was discovering one thing that Ellie was really easy trust, believe people.
…And Problem begins…
All night, Lina was writing a letter to Ellie, not a normal letter, a menace letter! Next day, Lina woke up early to put the letter in Ellie’s house letter-box but unlucky Ellie suddenly came out the house and met Lina. Lina was surprised and scared that Ellie would know the person who wrote that letter so she pretended to say that she wanted to come to school with Ellie. Lina was stuttering, but Ellie was so naïve that she believed what Lina said and she just happy. Unlucky for Lina again that Ellie was saw the letter in the letter-box so she took the letter and put in her bag. Then Ellie and Lina walked together to school, and everything was just normal like every day, talking, playing with each other…
Then when Ellie went home she started to read the letter... after while reading...Ellie started worry about it…her face was green, in the letter, there was some part said that Ellie couldn’t tell anybody or else bad luck would come to her so Ellie did not telling anybody at all.
The next day when Ellie walked to school, she was nervous and worried, when Lina met Ellie she saw Ellie with scared face, she was smiled, an evil smile. Start that day, Ellie’s score was decreased and when someone came and asked what happened to her, Ellie was quiet and said nothing. Next day Ellie was not come to school.
Sunday (after a week), when Ellie doing her homework, she heard a voice in her room, not a strange voice, the voice was really familiar to her but she didn’t remember who it was!? The voice was saying: “What happened to you, my darling? I will help you, so don’t be scared, remember that you’re the brave girl…aren’t you? ”. After heard that, Ellie was be calm explain all things and crying. Then the voice continued: “Oh, I have idea, how about you sharing your story that was really close to you maybe that person CAN help? And remember this, ALWAYS PAY ATTENTION TO PEOPLE…from now on, don’t be so trust and believe people because that can kill you someday just like now… And right now be strong my darling! Good luck!!” then everything started quiet. After while thinking about what the voice tried to saying and calm down, Ellie now was BACK to herself!
Next day she was normal happy and excited, and that made Lina was surprised about that because just last week, Ellie was frightened and now she was normal again?! Then Lina came and pretended to ask what happened to her, in that time, Ellie suddenly remembered what the voice said:“ , sharing your story who was really close to you maybe that person CAN help… and ALWAY PAY ATTENTION TO PEOPLE…”, so Ellie showed the letter and explained to Lina but not the voice story!! Then Lina suddenly said with a bored voice: “Oh, is that a menace letter?!” “Without looking and not even touch the letter and I did not explain everything, how can you know Lina?!” Ellie asked Lina startled and stuttered nonsense word!? Again, Ellie suddenly remembered what the voice said:” ALWAYS PAY ATTENTION TO PEOPLE…ATTENTION…“, then she suddenly remembered back when she got that letter…that was last week when she saw Lina was doing something with the letter-box …“That is, it was…LINA!!? How could Lina do that to me? I thought she was my best friend?! Why did she betray me? Why? WHY?!”, Ellie though. That day Ely was asking herself why and why…
After school Ellie asked Lina to meet her while to talk…Lina was doesn’t think that her plan was being found out so she accept. Then Ellie said:” It you were the person who wrote that letter?! Don’t lie!!!” Lina now trembled…then she said:” Oh, come on…, why I need to do that with you? You’re my best friend, remember? “, Ely continued:” I know that was you, last week you’re the person who put the letter in the letter-box!!”… Then Lina started quiet and fell down and cried, she explained that Ellie was stealing her popularity so that why she wrote that letter to make her become a loser so that she could be popular again. ...Instead of angry, Ellie comforted Lina and said it ok and forget about it.
Then after that they became true best friend and Lina were getting understand more Ellie. But there one problem that Ellie still confused is : Where did the voice come from and whose is that? The day went by she was recognized who that voice…It was Ms.A, her teacher. She also discovered that Ms.A was actually a fairy, person who always helped people get through thing!! Oh, and about Lina and Ellie, they were both popular and both lived happily ever after all.
The End
